"Slow down, what's on your mindAt the top of the page there is a red color box which goes across the two page. In it is a bullet point that reads "Bullied To Death?" Overlapping the box is a picture of an empty classroom. Really? Everyone knows what a classroom looks like and this one is no different. It is supposed to be dramatic or give us a picture into her life but it unnecessary. Below that is a titled picture of the victim with a white stroke line around it. The tilt throws me off but magazines can do what they want. The captions are in white and are located on the pictures.
It's alright, I'm on your side
I hate to see your injury, I wish that you could transfer all
Your pain to me
Stay here, it's ok to cry
Let me, help you make it right
Let's turn up our radio, let the bands remind you that your not
Alone
We all get low"
-Karmina
As for the story itself, it starts on the left page with a big deck. The story in starts with a 5 line big "O" and proceeds to be one paragraph in only one long column.Overall they used a lot of the design techniques which looked really good and followed most of the rules. Next time, PLEASE put the headline at the top. Thanks People Magazine.
